opinions on my new ad

[Guest naughtydog]

I run an ad in the local rag and wanted to change the format. here is a copy of the ad - I want some more creative help with the wording.

Does anybody have any tried and tested wording??

Thanks

ND

[Image Tint]

With a picture of a child in there I might say something about the safety factor instead of stick it where the sun shines.

[Guest thetintshop]

"keep your ray of sunshine out of the sunshine's rays."

[Guest naughtydog]

the wife said that

ND

[Guest naughtydog]

"keep your ray of sunshine out of the sunshine's rays."

Like it...a lot

Thanks thetintshop

ND

[Guest thetintshop]

that will be $1,478.59 sir.

[Tintcutter]

Good Job.

Now the security aspects when they call in. Keeping broken glass off the childs and all that won't hurt either.

[Guest naughtydog]

on it's way

ND

[Guest thetintshop]

on it's way

ND

kinda like LEO's films??

[Guest naughtydog]